His Touch

Is it sex? Is it making love? I don't guess it matters much becuz the feelings felt make me feel so high above.... I close my eyes and imagine your lips kissing me, makes me want to shout with glee... But I will remain quiet, as I do not wish to miss a moment of this erupting riot.. Your kisses begin behind my ears, moving my hair ever so slowly, calling me baby, love and dear.. From behind my ears, down my neck down to my shoulders... Meanwhile goosebumps are growing.... Moistness becoming wetter... Unable in my mind to ever find better. Now those lips are down to my breasts. Slowly tickling my tender skin with your tongue.. Smiling only how you do, lighting up your whole face, making me smile and feel full of grace.. As I arch my back and lie down to allow my body to become your playground. As clothes fall to the floor, I, myself wanting more and more.. Will leave it to the imagination... And you should already know what makes you feel good, makes me feel better.. Taking me to the moon and back, never letting me fall, has left a mark on me forever more... My soul has been touched, a small flame started, hopefully never to fizzle out and die... Theses feelings.. Are so erotic.. Such a shame I must keep so many to myself
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thank you Cherie :) I'm kinda new to this... Love reading everyone's poems and stories and figured I'd try to write some thoughts and ideas down and and see where it goes.. Please feel free to give me tips anytime... I love so much of your writing :)
Hey Carolyn!!........haven't read you before ....but......found this VERY compelling..........you definitely have a gift for using words...........and the eroticism is well delivered and VERY poetic.........I wish you had done more with your formatting,...... I think it would have added to the impact of this lovely write.........regardless......... 5*s .......well done.........and Welcome to COSMO!!........smiles.......T xo
Thank you very much Tony! I'm new at this, but since I've started, I find myself thinking of verses all the time, putting my feelings into words has become very interesting to me.. Thanks again for the vote of confidence and I'm going to work a little harder!
Charming, sensual sweetly understated write Carolyn; subtle erotica with a beating pulse....it's a superb poem, my friend....enjoyed reading this....cheers
Thanks Christopher! I'm putting my all into them now... Thanks again for the motivation!
Hi Carolyn Cade
Good, highly sensual, I love it, my applause, my five stars, wish to appreciated and feature in my POET'S PEN with your kind permission
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
of course Mr Maveli... My pleasure! Thank you!
Well thank you very much Jeff!