Poem -
History
What's history with out someone's memory? Is it good or is it bad, missing someone that no longer loves you that's the worst fake lies fake laughs when you know that they are the only one that makes you happy. What do you do when you miss someone; do you call them ? Text them? What we supposed to do. How can you call a memory? How can you call history faded images all
You have how can one memory trigger all emotion one smell one view so is our memory always with us, my biggest fear is losing you because with out you I have no one no love no one to call no memory no me.
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Comments
Hi, Thandey Bizayi, I love your unconventional but emotional approach of inner turmoil; a very strong point to write from and you took advantage of the versatility it affords...I'm not a fan of your formatting approach; had to re-read a few lines; not sure if your breaks were intentional or not...all in all though, this is terrific, took me places I could not predict, refreshing.... enjoyed and welcome
'...my biggest fear is losing you because with out you I have no one no love no one to call no memory no me.'
Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I will note down my formatting issues and try to fix them for my next post...thank you so much for taking time to read my poem.