Poem -
HOLLOW
can u see behind my smile
the empty behind my eyes
cloaking the failure
ignoring the inside cries
my skin feels like a wall
to keep the ugly in
asking will i feel
ever feel whole again
like a fish with no water
a zombie who only knows to follow
grown to hate who i am
a product of the hollow
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Steven, some brilliant lines with some vivid imagery. Such profound words
One of my favourites that I have read recently. A big vote from me, your writing is wonderful:)
thank u :) depression can be tough ,and wanted to express its honest and deep effect it can have
This is just a short and straight to the point way someone feels when depressed....no fancy beating around the bush ..just giving it the truth...straight to the heart of those who know and feel the same !
A great piece ....
Tina x
thank u :) really was hoping that people could feel and relate to it
great write congrats x
thank u :)
Good write, Congrats on your winning nomination. I admire the author for posting the below lines
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI