~ HOLY SURFER ~
{a dream scene}
I spied, a dimpled star in the heavens
As though a bejeweled telescope spoke to me
Of the common thread running through all things
Such a small space they occupy, in time's canopy
A dimpled smile, amid a momentary flare...
What a wondrous sight, to dance upright, in pure night
As though a golden telescope, caught the tail of a comet
And afforded me, as a witness, a most uncommon insight
A surf in the night's sun, and I, a rider upon it
A surfer, riding a tidal wave, far beyond twilight...
Forever transformed, my soul did break apart
As though an advanced telescope, spied my every DNA strand
And the great over-soul redirected it all through my heart
Where I became a Holy Surfer, riding in divinity's good hands
Diving boldly into, the original black hole of art...
And anticipating that glide
As a Holy Surfer
A surfer upon adrenaline
In its most natural form
Where truly appreciating the ride
And the beauty
In it all
I came,
To know,
Myself..
Tony Taylor
* inspired by my dreams
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love those dreams!.........................................................Jim
Me Too!!....Thanx JIM!!....stay groovy brother!!.......T xo : )
Wow we have both been thinking about heaven-sent stuff Tony ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💕💙💕
I noticed that JILL!!....we do it alot really.....I guess it's because you put up so many poems each day that we're bound to collide from time to time!!.....Yay!! I Love it!!....Thank you SO much for ALWAYS being here for everyone......you're the best!!.......smiles......T xo : )
Awww yeah I put up too many lol so only put up 2 today 💕💙⭐️
No JILL!!.....If you've got the inspiration you should keep writing as long as you feel inspired!!.....Keep 'em comin, dear poet sister!!.....your cyber-friend Tony!!......smiles...
Awww well I dont wanna hog Cosmo tho luv 💙💕💙
what great poem Tony
all stars borther
Thank You Captain GREG!!.....I appreciate it Brother!!......Hugs n Smiles!!......T xo : )
Tony it feels like a dream within a dream after reading you well written and surreally and beautifully presented poem.
Great imagination at work here and a joy to read and then reread.
And love your poignant closing line, superb!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.
Thanks for sharing, enjoy life and thanks for taking me on your journey and it's great venture to ride on.
Hey SHAUN!!.....what a great comment ` Thank You!!...I DO often times find inspiration from dreams.....I've even woke up one time and immediately wrote down an outline for a book!!,,,ALL from my dreams!! Anyway, Thanx for all the kind words and for recognizing the import of my final line!!......ALWAYS a pleasure to hear from you!!......Lots of Love to you and yours!!.......smiles.......T xo : )
I love the last verse Tony! It's my favourite and the best! Dreams are one of the best sources of writing....so free....so creative....so surreal....so unearthly.....and so much more. Great imagination with the title that leads this poem. Again philosophical and spiritual in one. Sssoo pinned for a later read! Px