An Honest Man

Once upon a time I fell in love with a smile,
A pair of brown eyes,
And a promise that ran a mile,
I fell for his laugh,
For his love and his care,
I fell for his tenderness,
For his mane of black hair,
Never a trace of bitterness,
Ever graced his eyes,
And never did I see him,
Try to fool me with his lies,
The one time I meet an honest man,
And now it seems like a beautiful dream,
A flash in the pan,
And a wonderful scheme,
I weep in my pillow,
My emotions burst at the seems,
Because the only time I met an honest man,
Was when he left me in my dreams...
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Comments
powerful, heartbreak expressedÂ
well, you write strongly and assertively.Â
Best wishes Jai :)
Thanks, personally I think I messed up a bit, but its nice to know someone likes it
Nope it reads well &Â
is strong; In my opinion anywayÂ
it's a good write,Â
best wishes Jai :)