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Honest to God !!! 😨😱

Honest to God !!! 😨😱

Amidst shadows of a sombreness I lay wide awake

As that torturous tinnitus hammered a headache 

I had suffered sleeplessness right through the darkness and just before daybreak

Wearily I could lie no more but that was my mistake..
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Trying not to disturb my husband I left the hallway light off

And as I tip-toed along our corridor I swear I heard a whispered cough

Well the hairs on my shoulders prickled up like little pins

And I felt frozen all of a sudden down from my head to my shins

Oh my Giddiant !! I saw silhouettes of some twins..
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Honest to God, they both looked right through my eyes

Looking back on my happenstance I don’t know who  got the bigger surprise

Then teardrops dripped from both of these spectres as I listened to macabre, mournful sighs

And when I blinked again they disappeared amidst my disturbing dramatise.. 

 

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Pratibha Savani

Omg Jill what a creepy, scary and creative write!!! I mean I dont wana be there but the narrative kept me glued with your perfect rhyme play!! Excellent piece! 👏👏👏
Px💜

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Jill Tait

Arghhhh luv lol I will never sleep tonight pml 😱💕🤣💜

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Greg Etsell

wow Jill i love it 
you got me thinking 
about a write i want to do 
oh boy now i i am thinking 2 poems
 

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Jill Tait

Awww brilliant Greg ⭐️💙⭐️

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Shaun Cronick

Jill, love to read a creepy dark one!!😱
The creepier the better and it has twins in it too!👏👏
Nicely and coldly presented and served up and the best of bloody luck trying to get some shuteye tonight , for there's not a ghost of chance.
And twins in anything remind me of The Shining.
Thanks for sharing the great chills and for that spooky pic too. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Jill Tait

Haha yup me too 🤣😄😨😱💕💙💕

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