Poem -

Hopeful Romantic

This feels right
in every way.
I fall for you 
La i ndiaidh lae
It's deeper, it's stronger
My heart growing fonder.

I can't be without you
It aches when I am.
This ought to be the storm before the calm.

Every part of me wants you
Pining, urges, cravings
This bold desire of mine.

Soon, my dear, our stars will align
We will be together 
All in good time.

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John Coggins

Loved it! Sooo alluring! And wonderfully hopeful ending!
much love.

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Jason Brown

This ought to be the storm before the calm.

Underneath the gentle simplicity of the writing and the quiet tone...underneath the subtle use of rhyme and varied line and stanza length...lurks the quickening heartbeat of obsession; it becomes more insistent in those closing stanzas ... it becomes almost frenzied!

Go hiontach.

J ;)

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Hannah Tallon

Jason, 

thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it too and appreciate the urgency about it! 

H â˜ș

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