Poem -

hopeless dreamer.

I writing to ( you ) to ( me )
The future ( you - me ) that i cannot yet be at 83
I hope ( we ) are well, loving life ,
So much that ( you - me ) at 23 suffered,
Still haunting our life at present, to the ( future )
i hope not follow,
a horrible pill to swallow
Such sacrifice of love,
For you ( me - we ) wear out heart on our sleeve,
but ever wishful of deprive
I hope ( we ) still believe in ( love ) everlasting,
the eternity of which of past present and future speak to seek ,
Are ( you ) well? as ( i -you ) am now weak ,
Did( ( you - me - we ) grow from the pain,
Learn from our struggles within the rain,
Did ( you - we ) find the light again,
I'm writing to ( you ) to ( me ) that i cannot
yet be at 83,
A piece of ( you ),
Is here Within ( me ), ( we ) are
Same ( heart ), did you find ( our )
Destiny ?
The house by the sea,
( Dreamland ) created within ( you ) now
at 33 to be,
Are ( we ) alone in ( our ) rocking chair,
sitting by the waves, as they rush to shore,
Do ( you - we ) still write,
Or has the pen no ink anymore?
I hope ( you ) remember ( me ),
Fighting in present, For whom i wish
( us ) to be, still a hopeless dreamer
for the landscape By the sea,
( you ) are ( me ) to be at 83,
Did ( we ) make the journey ( you )
And ( me ) the years
further ahead i cannot see,
Did ( we ) die younger ( our ) ashes within
the sea?
Are ( you - me - we ) reading this,
Or our children 1, 2 , 3,
Did we have more beautiful babies, on the
road to thee , at 83
For ( i ) in present,
cannot yet see,
Are ( we ) where ( i ) dreamt us to be,
Are ( you ) still ( me ) at 33 to be,
Just dreaming of what life,
Is left for thee?

Remember ( me ) at 33 , to be
With love to (you - me ) at 83 that
i cannot yet see, or be.

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Nardine Sanderson

I once took part in an activity years ago at 16, writing a letter to my future self at 26, i found the letter when i moved house after my divorce,
it said i wish to be a famous singer, and travel, or become a veterinary nurse,
well I'm not to be a famous singer, and i only have introduction and certificates one in veterinary nursing, i had all A+, b, c, have my certificates, but due two my daughters being 3 &2 at the time, and a partner that never supported my future i dropped out of schooling, I'm actually thinking of going back to school to do freelance journalism, mix of writing and photography, future is exciting to dream of xoxo

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Dan Ferem

Future is exciting to dream of....if U ask me your future You  seen from your 16th you was a complete success...AND...you've navigated thru one of Life's Perfect Storms (divorce, lived thru a female heart)...yeah you're kickin' ass, and you are ambassador of a serious Poem, Art Site ...but not to be forgotten, you know how to make people on the site feel welcome and actually loved, myself extremely included....you put a smile on my face hen I read your replies, I'm sure I am not alone, and that, dear Nardine touches all our hearts... We love You, Nardine!!! 

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Nardine Sanderson

Not sure what my life would be like without you all, so many hearts i love and adore in one place i call my home away from home, I'm so grateful having found Cosmo funnel, i was going through alot when i first stepped through the doors here, everyone welcomed me in the warmest way, i never thought i could fall in love with so many beautiful people, i guess my heart is bigger thea o thought it was, and plenty room for more, i cherish all the friendships I've made here since may,5th.thank you Dan and all you other beautiful hearts I'm proud to call my Cosmo family xoxo ❤ love always nardine, p.s I'm missing Mr. hennessee xoxo

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