Poem -
How Far We Will Go
Please take me,
Seriously?
What I speak,
Is truth.
I might be,
Deliriously,
In love with you.
Am I always,
On your mind?
The way you run,
Through mine.
When you,
Open your eyes to see.
Do you,
Picture me.
Standing there,
So out of place,
Not hesitant in time,
Your lips and tongue I intend to taste.
I don't want to be,
Glued to the phone guessing,
While were here now,
I wait for your blessing.
So frustrating,
That it bothers,
When I know our love will grow.
You have to test the waters,
To see how far will go.
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Comments
Hey D!! YAY!!.......I LOVE This brother.!!.......this is hands down my favorite write of yours so far!...........I am so excited to see you branch off into this formatting........It truly suits your sense of rhythm and timing.........This is SOOO good Devon......excited for you man..........excellent write.........lovely read!!..........wow!..........your friend and admirer..........5*s  FAV...........smiles...........T xx
Thank you Tony this really makes me happy. I have taken some advice from Jeremy and since then I have been mulling over how to apply and when and out of nowhere this idea struck me. I don't think I have nailed it down completely but I will be working on it. Means so much to here this from you Tony thanks a bunch your friend Devon
Thanks Curtis so very glad you liked it. I aim to adapt and improve iam open to criticism and it took just that to inspire this write. Thanks for the comment.
Very sweet write Devon, different direction from your well done xoxo
Thank you so much Nardine I will continue to go in all different directions it's the only way I know how to grow. Cherie thank you im glad you liked it. This idea came to me a little revealing in the shower lol. I tell all this because I lik to sing and this idea started off
As lyrics but kept it somewhat poetic. Im very pleased to hear so much good feedback thank you everyone made my day.