Poem -
HOW SWEET YOUR LIPS!
Your invitation lingered
Like an unmet promise.
Take me there again…
Into your arms, your heat.
Take me, love me deep
As the arc of evening
Slowly turns the shadows
And the stars wait to pierce
Night to reveal a new maze
For gazers to decipher.
I couldn't hear your voice
Quiet multiplied by quiet
Didn't interrupt with even
A quiver as you kissed me
In the moment of that eternity.
Unseen sparks kindled a fire…
Flames wandered through me
And my love lit the sky!
Of all that is pleasure
How sweet your lips!
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VAL!!.....this is SO good .........it belongs in the Library of Congress...........seriously.............not to many writers can maintain a long lasting moment..........this was a LONG moment that finished in the......instant ......of the kiss.........this is kick-ass writing my friend.........imagery melting into poetic moments...............well done sweet poetess............smiles.............T xo
Tony…  There are so many subtleties which can be experienced in a kiss if the one kissing you wants to ensure that you remember it moment by moment.  I so much enjoy being kissed even when I have to whisper a few instructions (smile). Â
Thank you so much for your overwhelming comments…you humble me!  I am so glad that you see what I was trying to capture.  Actually, I wasn't sure that I had until I received your commentary on this piece. Â
….smiles and xox
val
Amazing!!!!
Mark! Â Thank you! Â Glad you liked this piece.
val
Hello Val...
Perfect!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
S'Song! Â Glad you enjoyed this write.
val xox
Hi Valerie,
Very sweet and highly romantic
My applause, my vote
Regards
Williamsji Maveli
HI! Â Thanks for taking the time to read this one! Â So glad you like it!
val
Beautifully written!
Thank you William!
val
The beautiful nature of this poem manifests itself in every carefully orchestrated line. One to transform mood and intention !
Great romantic interpretation of what matters.
Lovely.
:)