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HUMAN RIGHTS

HUMAN RIGHTS

                            Since the dawn of time
                            We were offered the right to become humans,
                            Was it through evolution
                            Or by the will of god?
   
                            The eternal question will forever consume us,
                            And there will always be an opposite
                            Between the right and the wrong
                            From the rich to the poor

                            Time passing gave us knowledge
                            To the boundlessness of evolving minds
                            But the nature of man was underestimated
                            By the wits of time, over and over again

                            His capacity for immense cruelty
                            And forgetting the meaning of kind,
                            Had the amnesty created to grant pardon
                            And protect against heinous crime.

                            My hope—hope I still hold—
                            That time will find an elixir for ignorance,
                            But my hope is tested that it will have the medicine
                            To efface the evil from merciless hearts,

                            Unless we find the will to not fall, but fight
                            In the battle between fear and wisdom, 
                            To be delivered as victors 
                            To the line where freedom writes. 
                            

                                                                 
 

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Marion

What a deep deep write and so well written. The world is a continual desperate blood bath and has been for our entire presence on this planet and despite the fight for human rights, at some point I think one has to acknowledge there is more cruelty in the human being than love.
Hugs x 
 

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Shaun Cronick

Humanity today Bernadete is evidently turning a blind eye and deaf ear for Human Rights in general and when they don't, when the latest harrowing images of outrage appear on the news, nothing is truly resolved with regards to justice and the long term well being for those afflicted, at present.
At present I say, for as your powerfully well written thought provoking poem evidently shows, it doesn't dismiss the word hope.
 And I for one, am an avid supporter of hope, for over time, however long that maybe, common sense and decency will prevail.
Our bodies have five senses, touch, smell, taste, sight, hearing.
But not to be overlooked are the senses of our souls, intuition, peace, foresight, trust, and true empathy for others.
Time, I believe- will eventually tell.

Thank you Bernadete for sharing your poem of moral concern. 

 

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Bernadete van d...

I never replied to this, so I do now. Thank you Shaun for taking the time to reflect on it. Wise words. Well spoken! And your final words about intuition are terrific
Stay well. Greetings, B 

 

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Neville

This is excellent and has both my support and excellence running right through it from one end to the other . Here you have more than adequately covered a subject very dear to my own heart .. I so hope that the message is seen and appreciated by millions .. Neville x

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Shirley Harrison

This is a truly stunning, magnificent peice of poetic wisdom. Kudos a thousand times. Wow. 🌹 

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Bernadete van d...

I am starting to get emotional with so much support. Thank you my Cosmo friends. 
 

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