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What Lies Beneath

What Lies Beneath

When I put myself in your shoes
It does not properly fit,
Not because I don’t see,
It’s because the pain is so yours
and only you know what lies beneath,
But I can sow a few seeds
so you can walk on flowers
In times of great need.

--Bernadete vdw, '25

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Bernadete van d...

Thank you Rory. If you thinkĀ 
this is relevant to all,
I am so happy to hear that.
Take good care of yourself, Ā  BĀ 
Ā 

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Neville

What a delightful little tapestry you have woven .. and so nicely sown together .. NevilleĀ 

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Bernadete van d...

Neville, your words are poetry!Ā 
What a pleasure reading these words. Thank you for the treat
my friend. Ā Ā 
BernadeteĀ 

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Marion

What I love about these words is the acknowledgement. No...the narrator cannot know the pain of another but is there to help ...and soften the way with a perfumed carpet. Lovely B x

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Bernadete van d...

ā€œSoften the way with a perfumed carpetā€ā€¦ Marion, what a beautiful phrase. You also made poetry here. Stay well, stay inspired
my friend. Ā BĀ 

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