Poem -
HUNGRY
The sun came up today
And i was hungry for
Your words so i could
Feel your poem in my
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Soul i am hungry forΒ
Your love so i can feel
It in my heart and i am
Hungry for the sun shine
On my face i am hungry
For the skies to be blue
I am just hungry for lifeΒ
So please feed me your
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Words for i am hungry
For your poem so i can
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Feel it in my soulΒ
Then the sun went down
And now i am hungry
For the moon that i
Know it will come soon
I WAS HUNGRY.
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Comments
This is so moon cool my friend .. I particularly like the way you have adopted the two line stanza approach throughout but without breaking the flow .. Like I said Greg, very cool .......................................... Neville :)
Neville thank you so much
funny all week all week trying to find Β something to write Wrote down mini ideas
but nothing worked so this poem came to mind and just wrote it downΒ
It works for me .............. N :)
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Thank you MarionΒ
I like poetry that makes me feel something...and this poem brought hunger not just food hunger obviously I like the idea and the poem.. creative and clever
Lara
Thank you Lara