Poem -

Hurt

It's because I love you that it hurts
More than normal, the pain severe
Tears flow freely, emotional outbursts
I can't control it, my heart's in fear

My life without you, worth nothing at all 
Such bleakness, so dull... I just cannot bear 
The thought alone, makes the tears just fall 
For a life such as that gives me quite a scare

so sad it is, that grudges you keep
So cutting, your words, so cold to me
Needless and hurtful, they make me weep
All for nothing, why can't you see?

You've seen my tears, your heart is cold 
Blinded by anger, needless you know 
My heart, so sad... Just wants u to hold 
It doesn't matter... Coz I love you so...

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sparrowsong

Hello Sam...

Great first submission...

I Feel your sad heart Sam...

Thank you for sharing...

Welcome to Cosmo! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Sam_B

Hi Sparrowsong...

Thank you...

Thank you for reading... thank you for commenting...

It's taken a long time to muster the courage to post my words...

Sam

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Tony Taylor

Hey Sam!!.......a few days ago Cosmo was malfunctioning and I couldn't comment........ so I'm here now ........just wanted to say that what I liked about this write was not just the fact that you have a VERY strong sense of rhythm and timing....... but.......... you titled it "HURT" ~ then finished it with a very positive phrase.......... says ALOT about the author............. well done.......... and...........WELCOME to COSMO.......... high fives!!..........T xo

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