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Hypnotized

Hypnotized

I see you there, staring with lust in you eyes

Are you trying to seduce me? 

It's working, I'm absolutely hypnotized 

Come closer, make yourself comfortable

Press your lips against mine

There's no need to be subtle

Things are heating up, show me all of  you

My skin is tingling, my heart is pounding

Take me, do whatever you'd like to do

My love, so many years have past

I feel like we just met, a new lover

Do it as if it were our last

Mmmm, you're so sweet

I am absolutely hypnotized

The way you caress my curves, you've swept me off my feet

Love me like you know how, look into my diamond eyes

I am yours for the taking

I am hypnotized 

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

It's more. I have loved my husband since I was ten years old. I am now 24

Love and lust go hand in hand, can't have one without the other

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Tony Taylor

Hey Amber!!........ some VERY compelling imagery here.......... well delivered............".. the way you caress my curves.."........ great use of alliteration........... the whole piece moves well........ especially when you read it aloud.......... well done........... ALL STARS............ smiles............T xo

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

Hey Tony, thanks alot for your feed back. Sometimes I find myself not spending enough time on my work, because I just type as the words flow through my head. You know how that goes. I'm glad you enjoyed

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

Thanks Cherie. That was exactly what I was reaching for in this one. Passion can be so much more than just casual sex. Making love can also be exciting. Especially with someone you feel so strongly for

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