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HYPOTHETICAL OR NOT?

HYPOTHETICAL OR NOT?

Imagine standing between Heaven and Hell...

God and Satan standing right in front of you...

Satan has to hand you to God...

You have to explain your life and yourself...

God gives you a peek of what Heaven is...

He gives you a kiss on the cheek...

He says I have always loved you...

You shrug your shoulders...

You never cared...

Satan reaches out his hands because he knows with him you go...

God's arms are empty of you...

Satan throws you in the fire...

Laughing because another soul he has won...

Hypothetical or not?

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Kimmy Alan

Truly a devine force must exsist, for certainly evil does. 

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sparrowsong

Hello Kimmy...

Very true...

It certainly tries to put a veil over the beauty...

Doesn't it?

Thank you for your comment...

Take care my friend! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Rose Sho

This is thought provoking. "Satan reaches out his hands because he knows with him you go"... that made me cringed! We won't be another soul the devil will win but those who would not only take a peek at heaven but dwell in heaven forever. Nice one Sweet Sparrowsong!

Lots of love.....Rose

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sparrowsong

Hello Sweet Rose...

You and many others probably don't have any reason to cringe...

You won't peek in Heaven...

You'll get...

Booted in!

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tony Taylor

Hey FEATHERS!!.... yin or yang........ dark ~ light!!...... we all have a path to walk!!...... God only knows!!...... love this!!......... smiles......T xo

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sparrowsong

Hello P.D....

True...

But, I also think that we know it's wrong and we do it anyway...

Thank you for your comment and support! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

Yin or Yang?

Light and Dark...

At times, together it works like everything works better with two elements and...

There are times that two together can create something bad...

We all have a path to walk...

Glad you loved this!

Smiles...

Feathers 

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Richard Waters

We have to choose the path we take in life and have to accept the consequences after it if we do not do right by others.

Powerful piece.

Love and hugs !  :)

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

Some people can get away with so much it seems for so long...

It gives them a false sense of confidence or something...

I am not one of those...

I can't get away with anything...

Even the slightest thing that is not a big deal...

All I can say is...

Seriously? 

Nothing ! Nothing ! Nothing! 

I am glad though...

It's like...

No No No Sparrowsong...

Trouble ! Trouble ! Trouble !

LOL!

Thank you very much for your comment and support! 

Love and hugs ! :) 

sparrowsong 

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