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I adore you

Jills challenge three little words

I adore you

I tremble purely in your presence,Β 
Short of breath, reverie in pleasance.Β 
Timidity snares my hopes and dream,Β 
She smiles & I ache, is it me she's seen?Β 

Aspirations rise with every night,Β 
In morn again I succumb to blight,Β 
My amorous wish is to hold you, kiss you,
Credence in wane every time that I see you.Β 

Enthralled by the image of our eyes in meet,Β 
Beating drums in my chest fail discreet,Β 
My words flutter, will you help to allay?Β 
Would you come for a date with me? Yay or nay?Β 
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Tony Taylor

Dear Poet Brother SIMON!!
You have brought that accompanying image to life here BEAUTIFULLY!!…..to end with a question mark is absolutely perfect when you look at the man on bended knee!!…...Aw Hell!!...YES!...I'll come with you for a date!! (smiles)…..ALL STARS!!...well done my friend!!…….LOVE & ROCKETS!!….T xoΒ  : )

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Simon Bromley

Thank you Tony, this one is definitely out of my comfort zone so glad you liked it.Β 

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Jill Tait

Awww so read this beautifully my poetic friend so pinned for perfection β€οΈπŸ’™β€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’—πŸ’•

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Jill Tait

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Cherie Leigh

YayΒ  Simon!Β  You did my favorite genre of a love poem!Β  You can write about any subject and do such a wonderful job. I had to pin this to remember that you came over to my side of the woods of writing...Lol...Nothing more romantic than first date proposal.Β  I just LOVE love... xo I enjoyed. ;)Β 

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Simon Bromley

Lol so glad you liked it Cherie, i thought i would give it a go.Β  It took me longer than anything else i write but that's what i love about our challenges.Β Β 

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deano

Beautiful 😊❀

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Simon Bromley

Aww thank you i tried to recall my first crush 😊happy you liked it 

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deano

So nice to have such beautiful memoriesΒ 
well done xo

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Hard rock lover

Hey simon , what a cool write ! It reminds of my dating life at the moment nah or yay !very heartfelt write! Enjoyed it , rockΒ 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Friend Simon,

Your mastery lends itself to all genres of poetry.Β  Here, you have created a beautiful scenario of a young man's angst, with asking the apple of his eyes for a date.
You have taken me back to my junior year in high school, when I experienced the exact same thing.

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Simon Bromley

Many thanks larry, i love to experiment and I have an overactive imagination lol.  Thanks again 😊

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Marion Price

Oh wow...stunning Simon...you have perfectly captured the angst and also the beauty of possible new beginnings...a lovely write ..pinned πŸ’•

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Simon Bromley

Marion thank you so much for stopping by, overwhelmed by the support.Β 

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Wilford Barker

Hi Simon..
as old as I am.. I think I can learn from you on this one my friend..
Smooth moves.. lol.

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Simon Bromley

Hi wilford, thank you my friend lol.Β  Its been a long time since i dated probably wouldn't know where to start now lol.Β 

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