Poem -
I adore you
Jills challenge three little words
I tremble purely in your presence,Β
Short of breath, reverie in pleasance.Β
Timidity snares my hopes and dream,Β
She smiles & I ache, is it me she's seen?Β
Aspirations rise with every night,Β
In morn again I succumb to blight,Β
My amorous wish is to hold you, kiss you,
Credence in wane every time that I see you.Β
Enthralled by the image of our eyes in meet,Β
Beating drums in my chest fail discreet,Β
My words flutter, will you help to allay?Β
Would you come for a date with me? Yay or nay?Β
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Comments
Dear Poet Brother SIMON!!
You have brought that accompanying image to life here BEAUTIFULLY!!β¦..to end with a question mark is absolutely perfect when you look at the man on bended knee!!β¦...Aw Hell!!...YES!...I'll come with you for a date!! (smiles)β¦..ALL STARS!!...well done my friend!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦.T xoΒ : )
Thank you Tony, this one is definitely out of my comfort zone so glad you liked it.Β
awww this is so sweet!
? Thanks bestie lol
Awww so read this beautifully my poetic friend so pinned for perfection β€οΈ?β€οΈ???
Thank you Jill ?
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Now my bestie we need a collab challenge! what you think?
Hmm ill have a think lisa, ill inbox you.Β
Beautiful ?β€
Aww thank you i tried to recall my first crush ?happy you liked itΒ
So nice to have such beautiful memoriesΒ
well done xo
This is beautiful Simon
Thank you Anthony?
Hey simon , what a cool write ! It reminds of my dating life at the moment nah or yay !very heartfelt write! Enjoyed it , rockΒ
Thank you rock I truly appreciate your support
My Dear Friend Simon,
Your mastery lends itself to all genres of poetry.Β Here, you have created a beautiful scenario of a young man's angst, with asking the apple of his eyes for a date.
You have taken me back to my junior year in high school, when I experienced the exact same thing.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Many thanks larry, i love to experiment and I have an overactive imagination lol.Β Thanks again ?
Oh wow...stunning Simon...you have perfectly captured the angst and also the beauty of possible new beginnings...a lovely write ..pinned ?
Marion thank you so much for stopping by, overwhelmed by the support.Β
Hi Simon..
as old as I am.. I think I can learn from you on this one my friend..
Smooth moves.. lol.
Hi wilford, thank you my friend lol.Β Its been a long time since i dated probably wouldn't know where to start now lol.Β