Poem -
I AM A PUDDLE
Like 9 Pin it 5THE DARK CLOUDSĀ
COME IN IT STARTS
RAIN THE THUNDERĀ
LIGHTING AND NOWĀ
I AM A PUDDLE IĀ
CUDDLE THE ROAD
SIDE LIKE HOLDINGĀ
A BABY PLEASEĀ
DONT DRIVE THROUGH
ME AND SLASH ME
ITS LIKE BLOODĀ
FROM MY VEINSĀ
THE CLOUDSĀ
CLEAR AND ITS
NIGHT TIME AND THE
MOON SHINES ON ME
AND DAY LIGHT COMES
AND SUN COMS OUT
AND DRYS ME OUTĀ
I AM JUST ANOTHER WET SPOT
ON THE ROAD INTILL IT RAINS
AGIN WINTER IS COMEINGĀ
AND DARK CLOUDS COME
IN IT STARTS SNOW WITHĀ
ICE AND THE WIND BLOWS
NOW I AM A ICE PUDDLEĀ
PLEASE DONT WALK ONĀ
ME OR I WILL BRAKE
AND THEN I WILL BE IN
PIECES THE SUN CAME OUTĀ
MELTED ME NOW I AM
JUST ANOTHER WET SPOTĀ
I AM PUDDLEĀĀ
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Comments
Wow your mind is marvellously imaginative Greg I luvit!!! š¹šš¹
Thank you JillĀ
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Very cool Greg! Very refreshing to read! Px
Thank you pratibhaĀ
very creative
Thank you Greg
A super poem about something so everyday , Very well done Greg !
thank you Chris
Wow Greg, I am especially enjoying your new "I am" writes very creative and inspirational. Peace and smiles to you. I hope you are well~
thank you Fish
I love the imagery on this one Greg.Ā
Great write
Thank you Leah
Great stuff Greg...only you...or Jill š could transform a puddle into a poetically beautiful verse. Hugs lovely man š¤š¤
Thank you Marion wait until TheĀ
poem called I am a streetlamp Donāt know when Iāll get that one out
Greg superb to read and get carried along with and captivated by your well chosen words and enthralling imagination.
A puddle yes but a poetic and entertainingly heartfelt one at that.
Full honours given and deservedly so.
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Thank you Shaun
Greg I loved this so much. I took the puddle as an analogy for how fragile we can be. So much emotion within this write. Just loved your use of nature here. Beautifully worded my wonderful poetic friend šāļø
Gwen xĀ
Thank you GwendolineĀ
now next time you seeĀ
puddleĀ and how you know it feels
and you will look at it different
Absolutely Greg you are a wise owl indeed xĀ
Wow what a write Greg ! I particularly liked these lines:
āĀ DONT DRIVE THROUGH
ME AND SLASH ME
ITS LIKE BLOODĀ
FROM MY VEINS ā
Killer lines and awesome write !!
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You sure have style Greg & a great imagination too sir .. I particularly applaud how you have applied both in this super poem .. Neville :)
Thank you very much NevilleĀ
What you say means a lot to me
Iāve been writing Ā for six years now
just love to writeĀ
You really are most welcome Greg .. I tend to say it like I see it & although I may not always be popular, I try to always be honest & fair ..
Your enthusiasm for writing & for poetry in particular is unmistakably evident and I sincerely urge you to maintain that if you can .. So write on brother Greg & with my sincere blessing :)