Best Of Me
I can't believe you got the best of me.
I can't believe I trusted every word you said.
But now I see you for who you are.
I'm just ashamed I let myself out way too far.
Because now I can see you for who you are.
So, so long.
Don't wish me all the best of luck because you took it all with out a thought.
Please go searching for your next love, 'cause when you look back you'll realize what you've lost.
But now I can see you for who you are.
I'm ashamed I let myself out way too far.
Now I can see you for who you are.
I won't look at you.
I won't say your name.
You weren't worthy of my memories.
You weren't worthy of my time.
I just can see you for who you are.
A liar, a cheater, a high fever.
Something I helped build, but you let die.
I'm just ashamed I let myself out way too far.
Now I can see you for who you are.
So, so long.
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Hey LETAYA!!....I Love this so much...... for SO many reasons...... one of my first poems I ever wrote is so much like this...... it made me excited to see my sentiments come through another writers words....... still smiling girlfriend...... maybe sometime you could read it....... it's called "City Tree"..........I have so many poems though It'll be hard to find it...... but let me know...... and I'll find you the page number..... can't tell you how this made my spirit soar........ALL STARS. PINNED this one sweet poetess!! ........smiles.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Again...Thank you for the amazing and positive feedback TT! I really love your enthusiasm for poetry and writing in general! And I will look up your poem right after I finish penning this reply! I am so glad this 'angry' poem, I call it, makes your "Spirit Soar!"....I like knowing my writing impacted someone in someway! All the best to you!
Blue Soul, this poem reads like a song, I can actually hear the music as well, not sure if you play the guitar, I've ever 'heard' the words of a poem come out like that before, awesome to experience, the repeated verses hum and flow sweetly, wow, can't get over hearing singing, and music when I read this, anyway my friend you did a great job with this one, enjoyed hearing and reading, cheers
I am blushing! What a kind compliment, I think it almost too kind perhaps! I am so glad you can hear the 'voice' in it...because I purposely tried to make the poem that way. Thank you again! Hugs!