Poem -
I Am the Moon
I am the moon.
Constantly revealing different faces of myself,
To you, within each dark night.
Revolving around a unique piece of mass,
Bound by the strongest force imaginable.
Controlling the seas of spontaneous emotions.
Holding back the tides of burning desires.
I am the moon.
And you are the Earth.Â
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sounds like a pick up line I would use....
just kidding, but it should be, its very poetic, very deep, and very amotail.
good job jessica.
singed Russ.
Thank you for your input and interesting evaluation. I truly appreciate your feedback! :)Â
Fantastic comparison. Emotional thoughts are expressed in idealistic manner. Lovable.
I'm so glad you think so! Thank you for taking the time to read my work :)
Love it ! Enjoyed reading it xx
Thank you!!!Â
Greetings Jessica,
Two attractual hearts, entwined in cosmic motion with humanistic characteristics, great interjectual comparison to human emotions….style reminds me of Shahs…
Again Great Job,
Jim
That is an exquisite analysis of my poem. If you don't mind me asking, who is Shah? Thank you for your feedback and marvelous reflection!! :)Â
Thanks Jessica,
Not at all, glad you asked....She is an extremely talented Poet and Author I have had the pleasure in acquaintance, (through several  unfortunate adversarial encounters) I and my significant other has endured  in some months gone past....She and several others were very instrumental in their prayers and concern when it was needed the most....One  of those Angels on Earth that you hear about but rarely get the chance of seeing....
Sincerely,
Jim
She sounds wonderful, I appreciate the comparison and the information :)Â