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I AM WATER

I AM WATER

                                                                                         
                                        I am water, and my story is told in liquid form.
                                        I’ll give, and I’ll take, that’s who I am
                                         --earth’s primordial flow.
                                        But I am always with you, inside you and within you
                                        as you would not exist without me,
                                        I am the matrix of life!
                                        In turbulence I am the emotions of your thoughts
                                        In stillness I am your tranquil and your calm
                                        In sadness I stream down your face
                                        until I reach your anguished heart,
                                        but in joy I flow to your lips enticing a smile so bright.  
                                        Surrender in me
                                        I am water!
                                        always in constant motion
                                        of renew, rebirth and grow.
     

                                           —Bernadete vdw, ‘24   

 

                                                       

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Marion

And so it is... the life-force within
and without. Strangely I have not long back from a late night stroll on my beach in the rain lol ...and I find this gem. Did you know lol. A beautiful work B x

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Bernadete van d...

Oh, maybe this water is trying to tell you something. 
—When the rain washes away your pain, embrace it!
I’ll write a little poem with these words and not going to say, but you know it’s for you. 

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John Prophet

Wonderful verse. Where would we be without?

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Bernadete van d...

Thank you John for reading this. Cheers! and I am glad you like it.  B 

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Bernadete van d...

Jee, Bernie, how can you be so good in analysing writings? It’s almost like you enter our minds and have a little read in there. Quite scary! 😁 But I think it’s your love for poetry that makes you understand it so well. And your teacher’s mind helps a lot. Well, thank you for taking the time to read this. 🙏

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Being Me

A beautifully written poem. Water. The most precious thing on our planet x

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Bernadete van d...

Yes, the most precious thing. We are water. Thanks a lot, Being Me, I
really appreciate (even if I don't say it sometimes), but I really do and love
when you share your thoughts. By sharing it we improve our writings and
have fun. It has to be fun, hasn't it?! Hugs, B 

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Neville

You are absolutely spot on not only a beautiful poem but a fact of life too .. Neville 

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Charlotte Leroi

Water truly is the essence of life.
What a beautiful homage !

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