I AM WATER
I am water, and my story is told in liquid form.
I’ll give, and I’ll take, that’s who I am,
--Earth’s primordial flow.
But I am always with you, inside you and within you
as you would not exist without me,
I am the matrix of life!
In turbulence I am the emotions of your thoughts
In fury I am your temper
In stillness I am your tranquility and your calm
In sadness I stream down your face
until I reach your anguished heart,
But in joy I flow to your lips enticing a smile so bright.
I am always in constant motion
of renew, rebirth, and grow.
I am water!
Surrender in me.
—Bernadete vdw, ‘24
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And so it is... the life-force within
and without. Strangely I have not long back from a late night stroll on my beach in the rain lol ...and I find this gem. Did you know lol. A beautiful work B x
Oh, maybe this water is trying to tell you something.
—When the rain washes away your pain, embrace it!
I’ll write a little poem with these words and not going to say, but you know it’s for you.
Wonderful verse. Where would we be without?
Thank you John for reading this. Cheers! and I am glad you like it. B
Jee, Bernie, how can you be so good in analysing writings? It’s almost like you enter our minds and have a little read in there. Quite scary! 😁 But I think it’s your love for poetry that makes you understand it so well. And your teacher’s mind helps a lot. Well, thank you for taking the time to read this. 🙏
A beautifully written poem. Water. The most precious thing on our planet x
Yes, the most precious thing. We are water. Thanks a lot, Being Me, I
really appreciate (even if I don't say it sometimes), but I really do and love
when you share your thoughts. By sharing it we improve our writings and
have fun. It has to be fun, hasn't it?! Hugs, B
Absolutely it does!
You are absolutely spot on not only a beautiful poem but a fact of life too .. Neville
Water truly is the essence of life.
What a beautiful homage !