Poem -
I am...me
"I am" who are you? Challenge
Like 11 Pin it 5Midst reverie, cloistered in thought,
Apathy, unduly refrain.Β
Twixt chivalry, Verity wrought,
Sparring to ascertain.I do all I can for the people I love,
I love to make people smile,
It lifts me to no end,
If only for a short while.Fingernails embedded in my gums,
Incessantly I procrastinate & bow,
Angst, resounding beating of drums,
Core in self worth & row.My belief is never in question,
I would die without doubt for my children,
I am open to advice and suggestion,
Though self doubt would boil up a cauldron.Bittersweet variety,
I pray the echo would leave me be,
Sustained in dubiety,
My very own stalker is me!
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Comments
I really liked the language of the poem. Excellent word choices.Β
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Thank you Katina I thought this would prove to be a really cool challenge choice.Β I glimpse into someone's life, how you see yourself.Β Thanks for your support
Simon enjoyed this read. Like reading your stuff!! Cool writer β
I have already done an I AM poem which is already on here but will do one of the challenge posts soon. Looks like fun. ?
Thank my friend for all your support.Β Yea please do join in its fantastic and challenges your capabilities and range, pardon the pun
Simon what a haunting poem. Enjoyed reading this. It has alot of depth. ThanksΒ
Thank you so much.Β I believe poetry is honesty and pure emotion at its best.
Blinkinβ brilliant man β€οΈ?β€οΈPinnedΒ
Thank you Jill ? bless youΒ
Well just did in last few mins lol so prob coulda added more but lol
must sign off its late xxx β€οΈ?β€οΈ
i willΒ do it some dayΒ
great poem you did
Thank you Greg look forward to it
Hi Simon,
A profound write! Youβre a wonderful poet... Iβm really enjoying your writes. Pinned!Β
Lauren?
Lauren I'm honoured thank you.Β I really enjoy your writes tooΒ
ok i wrote itΒ
Awesome Greg ?
wonderful write Simon, I'm a comedian sometimes I hope mine reflects who I am.
Brilliant Lisa I'll pop by and take a look
Incredibly displayed Simon! Your soul I can only surmise carries honour within it, and a light that is triumphant over all the abstract and struggle!
Thank you Ian, I do try and be the good soul, the guy who will always listen to your problems, always try to help.Β I stress over little things, I guess I'm just like everyone else, human.
Hi Simon, hope you're keeping well in these uncertain times.Β
This is a brilliant write. You sound like a very decent person and you are certainly very gifted at writing poetry.
Best wishesΒ - SydΒ
Thank you Syd I try to be! Hope you're well too thank you got your kind comments
My Dear Friend Simon,
Again, your powerful words enchant me.Β A must pin!
I feel that I must respond with a Haiku.
I am a father
I love my children dearly
They are who I am
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry awesome response, your continuing support is amazing.
My Dear Friend Simon,
As is your brilliant poetry.
All my love,
Larry xxx
I know this was written a few years ago now, but it's the first time I have seen it. love it!Β Β
Thank you.Β This was part of a challenge that we used to do and it definitely enhanced and pushed our limits.
We should do challenges again, maybe. This site is not what it used to be, sadly x