I CAN FEED THE WORLD
A star exploded in my soul last night, today became the dream
The vision I've been expecting, in the form of energy
It has reached into the recesses of my belief system
It is revealing itself in shapes, in books, and thoughts
In visions, friendships, signs, and relative Stigmata
A magnetic voice is pulling me, an energy of light so pure
Like symbolism showing itself, between lines of scripture
I am becoming universal fervor wrapped in the coming times
I am manifesting reasons to live and breathe in this reality
Of obviously evolving human minds and capabilities
Am I to be what You want me to, or do I have a choice ?
Now that I've put my faith in You
I've been questioning everything, do You have questions too ?
Are we transporting answers to You ?
I believe I am being used, to spread the Love,
And to share a simple smile
With everything You have given us
Like the star that exploded in my soul last night
I will " Pay it forward" and I will pray
That I have done things right
Like a perfect potato
I can feed the world...
Tony Taylor
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Hi Tony, I really enjoyed this immensely...it felt really inspirational.....I am not going to pretend I know how the perfect potato will feed the world, but I love this positivity in this piece
it sounds like you have a mission!
Great stuff
Lorna
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AHH it took a while.....the perfect potato!! I hope I'm right.... the potato and everything else is perfectly made....and you hope to do the same.....I think I've got it ..... brilliant
Lorna
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My hats off to you for asking what something meant online and not pretending to know. Lets all stay humble. ?
Enlightenment...of any kind is one hell of an experience. So I've been told. The only kind I have tend to be under the influence of copious amounts of alcohol. I can never remember the next day. This is a brilliant write in sharing something that has affected you with such positivity. And the potato...super food...super Tony :)
LOL!!...thanx for sharing that information brother.....I can totally relate!! ~ 'nuff said!!.....I appreciate the positive feedback and it's interesting how I can't seem to escape the potato in this (smiles)....thanx again LOST!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀
How is it that a poem which is filled with cosmic imagery of exploding stars, magnetic voices and communing with the divine leaves you, at the very end, with the overarching image of...a potato?!?
It's the bizarre simile at the end of the poem. It's so utterly unexpected and magnificently out of place ... a masterstroke of 'shock and awe' writing.
{The image you used rather hammers the point home as well!!}
This piece is about so much more...about so many important things...but I fear it shall forever be known as Tony's 'Potato Poem'!! ?
This is extremely well written and the imagery is very powerful...but all I see is...
????? (Yes, I will have fries with that!!)
J ;)
Dear brother poet JASON!!..... another amazing comment .....making my night over here my friend...... It really is driving me nuts that this write has become my Potato Poem!! LOL!!..... Cherie keeps picking on me saying "I told you so!"..... what I LOVE is the fact that you recognized my attempt at surprise in that final line...... You're the man!!.....thanx for that!!..... but.... your reference to French Fries at the end of your comment was a stab in the heart of my understanding sense of humor!! (smiles)..... I'm kidding of course.....thanx so much for being cool!!...... and keeping the flow of laughter coming!!..... Cherie laughed out loud when I read her your comment..... high fives bro!!...... later......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Hello Tony...
I read this a couple of times and my mind kept going back to the story of how Jesus supplied with the loaves and fishes from just one...
You can feed the World my friend!
Don't doubt it will be fed well...
We have been given everything we need, we all have to our part in preserving and sharing...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hug z and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Hey thanx FEATHERS!!...I know the story well... and you're justified in your comparison!!....... awesome light you've shined here and I truly appreciate it sister girl!!...... stay groovy!!......hugs-n-smiles to you!!......ttyl......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Yeah you're definitely a perfect potato Tony ha ha. I understood this poem - Love & rockets n all that - Syd
Thanx SYD!!.....Ha Ha!!...... making mash of my potato poem!!....thanx for making me smile brother poet!!...... peace.......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
This progression is beautiful and very symbolic. One of my personal favs out of works I`ve seen on here. Looking forward to more! ?
Hey BLANKS!!..... hope it's ok to refer to you that way?!......SO cool that you consider it among your fav's!!.....I appreciate so much how you've been taking interest in my page lately!!...... I'm gonna go check out your page right now!!.....thanx for this brother poet!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀
Thats ok with me, no worries here haha. I explained in the other comment the orgin of my username to clue you in. No problem brother poet! xo -Mason