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I could’ve/ev’dluoc I

Surrounded by those who have been hurt by others, for only being true to themselves. 

Hearing the disappointment with each word spoken out loud, I could’ve only actually hoped, that it’d be me to take back that place of whom that it is causing pain. 

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The fish of the sea

it’d be me to take back that place of whom that it is causing pain. 

I get a stuttering, broken vibe from this line, but no clue how you have managed it. Very very clever poetry. Best wishes to you. TFOTS

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Tiana Devlin-Sailor

Thankyou very much for the feedback. Hope it was an enjoyable read for you. :) 

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