Poem -

I Dipped My Toes, You Went Head Under

I asked you to please take me home-
You drove us into the sea.
When I was swimming away
You weren't following me.
You'd gone home to the sea-
Felt so real for a dream.
 

You were saying to me
 

If only to wash over
The pale palette
Of wakeful noise
And bare-all brightness
With the splendor 
And bliss 
Of silence and dreams-
Take me under;
Put me out.
There's nothing else.
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Amanda...

Welcome to Cosmo! 

That is quite a dream...

If it's a recurring dream this would be one that holds a very important message...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Amanda Palmer

Thank you for the warm welcome, and for the kind words :)

hugs

moon.beam.

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