I hate you.
I hate you, you know,
The way you gave up,
Without a fight,
I counted the tears you caused,
Every night,
I hate that you pretend to care,
The look it your eyes,
When your standing there,
I hate the way you speak,
The sound of your voice,
makes we weak,
You hate the fact i won't talk,
I hate the way you walk,
The way you move,
Careless,
Nothing left to prove,
I hate that you said you loved me,
But you were never there,
I hate that i was lonely,
Even when you were there,
I hate that when i hugged you,
You never hugged me back,
Your hands behind you,
Were you blind, you?
How could you not see me,
How could you not hear me,
What was it the repelled you,
YOU DIDN'T Need Me,
BUT You CARELESSLY FREED ME,
You walked away,
But you left me broken,
To this day,
I hate you , you know,
I wish I'd never met you at all,
Then i wouldn't regret you,
My heart wouldn't have taken,
the fall .
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Hello my dear friend,
It is best to hate that which has offended us, rather than the contents of our self-character.....You have all the right in the world to cast out, all of your harbored feelings of mistrust, loneliness, things needed to be said are should not, have been said, , Words  ("I LOVE YOU''..hoping to be recited, in our today’s relationships, rather than kept in reserve, for our tomorrow’s amends, in order to make up for, our past mistakes, are even never to be said nor ever heard, at all. These are the days of our lives, which exist no place in time and in any one’s life, for rejection, denied love, lack of support, and protection. Yours be the heart of an innocent, In search of the true cause and reasons of an eluded love, earned by she, throughout the entire relationship but not yet, are has it to ever have been gained. A heart left to be forever bent, by another but refused to be accepted, as tattered and broken, by its recipient….Though she continue to hold on, with hope and, that through faith, one day, those eluded words, will be rendered, (BY ANOTHER),thus keeping the lonesome heart, forever in contention and open, for that special day and guy, in time, to one day once again arrive and take its place in her life…A wonderful poem, of expectations not to be lived up to, are given, by one,(he) and forever lost, by another,(she) until once again she has reason to love again….Wonderful poem of an aching unprotected hear………
Take Care, My friend,
JimÂ
Dearest Jimmy,
thank you for your well conceived thoughts and feelings to this write, men's the world to me to hear it relayed back where i can see it all in a clear understanding, love can be a cruel place for a heart to survive, especially when it is all one sided, the letting go is harder, there are so many questions left unanswered, leaving the heart in silent abyss,
only new love will unfold the darkness, in which my heart is forever hopeful ,
thank you again dear friend for your kind and thoughtful reply, i am in deepest thoughts right now,
love to you sweetheart nardine xoxo
Another superb piece and an excellent example of your wonderful poetic talent. Well written as usual, you clever lady! I love you sweety. G xx
Thank you sweet Goergi girl, you are an amazing lady, with a gentle heart , love you heaps, nardine xoxo