Poem -
fractured picture
there is the faintest change
in that slight smile
an alteration in the skin perhaps
or some trick of the eye played out by light
there is something not right
in those eyes
a fading in their colour
or is it all the mistake of the beholder
there is a thing so undefined
yet so utter in evidence
the picture I once looked upon
is no longer there
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WOW!!.... This is such a well crafted and sculpted piece!!...... the meticulous phrasing paints outstanding imagery and a graceful sense of caring for the object of your affection here!!.....a pleasure to read brother poet!!.....ALL STARS!! .,...well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....... WELCOME to COSMO STEFAN !!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T ?✳✴☀
thank you.
generous.
appreciated
Hi Stefan, lovely lines. Little changes could mean a lot, little change could make something special go forever.
Great job. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.
thank you Cleo
my replies to comments seem to be adding to my number of comments, like I am commenting on my own work. Wonder if my replies are going to where they should be going