Poem -

I never knew

I never knew

I never knew
as I was in 
My own shell
the day you
Slipped by
Into a decision 
Of fatal
Consequences 

I never knew
that my ignorance 
Could lead 
Me 
Down  a rabbit 
Hole 
Where 
Digging myself
Out 
Would
become increasingly 
An impossibility 

Fresh memories
Are brushed 
By
rusty nails
That 
are drilled
In my
Senses 
No Paris
At the Moment 
more like 
PERRIS
BUT
I am
getting
there

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

" rusty nails that are drilled in my senses" powerful! .............Jim

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author
Yiyan Han

If PERRIS is what as shown here, it's lovely at least on pictures

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Perris,_California

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author
GREG TUCKER THE...

Yiyan No it is a shit hole trust me.  30 minutes from my house. I live in a nice area but Perris is not

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author
Being Me

I like this Greg. This has some awesome lines and is a really powerful write

I never knew
that my ignorance 
Could lead 
Me 
Down  a rabbit 
Hole 
Where 
Digging myself
Out 
Would
become increasingly 
An impossibility 

I think we all know what this feels like!

Strong writing here Greg x

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author
Bradford

Good evening Greg 
I never knew my ignorance would lead me down a rabbit hole . A great line in a wonderful poem. Merry Christmas,rock 

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