A lot of positive feelings in this piece of work allow no one to rain on your parade and as my buddies ahead of me states," you displayed confidence without any ,(outside of your zone) interruption." progress isn't encountered and conquered, by the constant interruption, of looking in back of you...
Inspiration flows from you. I'm amazed that You said that "The End..." was written by you at age 10. You've grown into a wonderful artist. I'll find the time to keep reading your work. So far (I haven't been her long), Jimmy Arnold has shown great insight in his comments. I haven't been writing long, I'm still learning- but I know enough to show my appreciation to poets who touch my spirit. You've done this. Thank you.
That was delivered better than any could and all your comments, such as your poems,is in a class of its own,with its own personal finger prints as a locater to and for the author and full of experienced wisdom for all those that wishes to know...I for one will continue to be in (Ah) of your works.... Because i for one wishes to know........
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Really beautiful poem... great job :)
Thanks a lot guys! (:
Hey Dominique,
A lot of positive feelings in this piece of work allow no one to rain on your parade and as my buddies ahead of me states," you displayed confidence without any ,(outside of your zone) interruption." progress isn't encountered and conquered, by the constant interruption, of looking in back of you...
Great Piece,
Jim
Dominique,
Inspiration flows from you. I'm amazed that You said that "The End..." was written by you at age 10. You've grown into a wonderful artist. I'll find the time to keep reading your work. So far (I haven't been her long), Jimmy Arnold has shown great insight in his comments. I haven't been writing long, I'm still learning- but I know enough to show my appreciation to poets who touch my spirit. You've done this. Thank you.
James Whaley
Hey James ,
That was delivered better than any could and all your comments, such as your poems,is in a class of its own,with its own personal finger prints as a locater to and for the author and full of experienced wisdom for all those that wishes to know...I for one will continue to be in (Ah) of your works.... Because i for one wishes to know........
Later,
Jim