Poem -
I recognize the feeling
to have coddled in smiles and giggles
to know of insane anticipations and niggles
to be sleepless mad and blind
to know of such vortex heavenly and divine
to know of love and know of loss
mortal moments thereafter and thus
to know of dreaming following seeing
to recognize these feelings and then being
to recognize these feelings and then being
to recognize these feelings and then being
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Hi Bahar, this is strangely compelling for me..........it's a strong write........but the repetition of those last 3 lines.....made it haunting............well done my friend............tony xx
oh you're just saying that..lol..........thank you.
I never kid about......words.........:)........t xx
Highly appreciated devise, it looks like the poetess has suffered with never ending tragic incidents..the following lines are really beautiful:-
"to know of love and know of loss
mortal moments thereafter and thus
to know of dreaming following seeing
to recognize these feelings and then being
to recognize these feelings................."
With love,
Thank you Ravindra. It's difficult to let go of once was and know that it's gone for ever.
excuse me...typo "it's difficult to let go of what once was......................."..
by the way, I guess you can't edit comments.