Poem -
I Rise
I rise from my body
My fall Ă l'envers
Through cold brilliant sunlight
And thinness of air
Past grasping atoms
Into almost bare space
And I shift my gaze back
And I wish for your face
I'll one day be back
With the wind in my hair
Some bright afternoon
And all devil-may-care
With the kiss that I owed you
When I fell away
With the kiss I left holding
Until it is paid.
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Comments
Simply excellent wordsmithing my friend!!......a lovely, poetic, offering......delivered with near-perfect rhythm and timing......VERY well crafted/placed word choices.....and (of course) one of THE very best Surnames ever carved out of the English language!! (smiles)....but seriously, a fine piece of verse my kind sir!!......ALL STARS!!...and.....in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO KEVIN!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : Ps. I tried to leave STARS/Vote but the system is doing weird stuff again!!
Welcome!...................Jim
Oh this is a beautiful, beautiful poem, Kevin. So very romantic. I absolutely love this. Pinned to read again and again x
Love this heaps. So very unique. Kind regards. TFOTSÂ
at a loss for words, yours here leave me searching for the right ones, love this poem, admire the whole of it and the piecesÂ