I see you
And you’re hiding
I breathe you
And you’re crying
I grew u a smile
You shattered it after awhileÂ
Didn’t take me long to see
By then I was in love with thee
Hi again, I don't know why, but this poem really resonates with me. I love its simplicity and somewhat highlights the challenges of a relationship but also excitment,
Sorry if I got it all wrong, I dont mean to offend. I loved this read. This Fish of the Sea.
Isn’t that the beauty of poetry, or all art for that matter? It can mean different things to different people?
No offence taken?,.Â
Yes it is definitely about relationship’s and the fact that there is joy and sadness all rolled up together.
Thanks so much for your feed back, I really appreciate it?
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Hi again, I don't know why, but this poem really resonates with me. I love its simplicity and somewhat highlights the challenges of a relationship but also excitment,
Sorry if I got it all wrong, I dont mean to offend. I loved this read. This Fish of the Sea.
Isn’t that the beauty of poetry, or all art for that matter? It can mean different things to different people?
No offence taken?,.Â
Yes it is definitely about relationship’s and the fact that there is joy and sadness all rolled up together.
Thanks so much for your feed back, I really appreciate it?