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I Shall Hypnotise 👁

I Shall Hypnotise 👁

Look into my eyes, I shall hypnotise

Close your consciousness from caring, let your mind mesmerise

I will fascinate your five senses like you have never ever known

Lost in a lavishness of  a loveliness whilst you lie all alone

Staring at my eyes where my Irises are blue

I have completely full control, I am captivating you

You can see what I am seeing, and my voice is clear

Do not worry you are safe, there is nothing to fear

We are dancing in yon dreams, bursting bubbles that float by

Popping and bopping pretty bubbles as they rise to the sky

You have drifted back beyond, when you were very small

Babbling and giggling, learning to crawl

Those years are rolling by, you are paddling in the cold sea

There is happiness in your hazy head, where your soul runs free

Now you are disco dancing, all dressed to impress

And that lad close beside you, must be your husband now, I guess

But Oh how that timelessness of time, spirals those cycles like a lyrical rhyme

We are fixated on each other, I have shown you all the good things from your past

And clicking my fingers..One, two, three, ..you can open your eyes again..you are back to reality at last…

 

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Jill Tait

Thankx luv so much 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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Gwendoline

Wow Jill this has that eerie feel at the start. Which perfectly gives the reader that sensation of a hypnotist. Then you take us on a magical journey through life and love. Beautiful writing 
Gwen x

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Jill Tait

Awww so pleased you enjoy❤️🌹❤️👁

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Greg Etsell

gave up the ida 
about the midnight train 
maybe someing better will
come to mind

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Jill Tait

Awww dont worry about it tho xxx

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Tony Taylor

Friggin' Brilliant phrasing in this piece JILL!!......The words themselves being as captivating as the act of hypnotizing itself!!......Stellar stuff my friend!!.....PINNED!!....well done!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

So pleased you enjoy my friend ❤️🌹❤️

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