I THOUGHT I HEARD YOU LAUGHING
Remember the day my friend and I visited your grave?
Family and friends had placed flowers while they sat with you...
My friend and I walked and walked to find water for the flowers...
An empty soda can had become a watering can...
Several trips it took to water all the beautiful flowers...
I though I heard you laughing...
After arriving back home I announced...
Don't worry about the flowers...
I watered them all...
Then laughter filled the room...
You watered the flowers?
My friend gave me that what did we do look?
She had explained to Mother how exhausting it was...
Mother laughed for the first time since you passed...
You watered your Brothers flowers?
When did you realize they were not real?
Just now I replied...
Hugs...
Your Sister
I miss you Brother!
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Nice One Sparrowsong been there done that
good write
Hugs
Rick
Holy Crap FEATHERS!!......... this SO good..... you Really have a gift for these type of vignette's dripping with humor and profound underlying content.......... the way you structure and format........ the way you use dialogue........... you're UNIQUE as hell......... I'm sorry to hear of your brother my friend......... the imagery created in the minds eye of your reader with this piece is Amazing...... and even though there is a sadness here........ you finish it with a smile.......... yours is an elegant soul......... you should be VERY proud of this write..........ALL STARS. PINNED............ you're awesome............. kisses...........T xo
Hello Rick...
I'm sorry that you're familiar with this...
Thank you for your comment...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
Hello Tony...
Thank you for your love you send...
Please accept my thoughts and condolences for you also my friend for the loved ones that your and family have had to deal with also...
Thank you for your sweet comment...
With Love,
FeathersÂ
This is a sweet and beautiful write, with that sparrowsong humored twist. Love it! A great tribute and iam sorry for your loss. My love and respect goes out to you.Â
Hello Sis Cherie...
Thank you for your loving comment...
Hope all is well!
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
Hello Devon...
Thank you for your condolences...
Thank you for the love...
Maybe it was the mistake I needed to make...
For my Mother's benefit...
I don't if I will ever know...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
A touching delightful story that only you could write in such an enchanting manner !
One of your best ! Still smiling though also sorry for your loss.
A wonderful work I want to give 6 stars.
HUG !
Hello Richard...
If you weren't halfway around the World...
I would you give you A Big Hug and Kiss!
Your comment is...
VERY SWEET!
Thank you very much!Â
HUG!
sparrowsongÂ
:) Â Hug !!!