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I Whimper upon a thorn, for I Long the Immortal Love

I whimper upon a thorn, for I long the immortal love. My
Soul, drenched in thickets. Such effulgence, haunting my
Splintered heart: her beauty, a sacred whetstone. I panic
For her embrace. It’s unto blue-black rain, mizzling the
Soul. Such majesty captured in gestures. Unto wisdom,
Love, an endless cave. Thus I suffer a flickering light.
It’s the cobblestone of blood, a symbolic omen. It’s the motif
Of death, unto tears and sweat. Wherefore, in panic I fell.
 
In the desert she wept, alone and free, pleading with destiny.
Such splendor, the ache of passion. And her soul, seeping
Into my spirit. Thus my palms, flooded with chaos. It’s a
Flaming storm, starlit with scars. It’s the wrath of thoughts,
Inflicting the heart. It’s a mandolin, serenading the future.
Thus I whimper upon a thorn, for I long the immortal love. 

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Yesenia Acevedo

Amazing! So many brilliant lines. My favorite, " in the desert she wept, alone and free, pleading with destiny." 

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Glenn Marchand

Yesenia, I thank you for your encouragement. And I am pleased to read that you enjoyed reading it.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Glenn Marchand

As stated by our esteemed Poetess Yesenia Acevedo as above, this is a fabulous  verse tailored beautifully with the thorns and burns of love. What we feel affection for has many faces, many souls. It burrows under shades of a tree or dives deep into the ocean. It flies high sometimes, and moves quickly. Sometimes love burns. I love the below lines. My applause, My vote , My nomination

Into my spirit. Thus my palms, flooded with chaos. It’s a
Flaming storm, starlit with scars. It’s the wrath of thoughts

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Glenn Marchand

WilliamsJI, I thank you for your comments. they have inspired me.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Congrats on your winning nomination, Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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