Poem -

If I...

If I...

 
if I knew tomorrow was never to appear
I’d hold back all the clocks and always keep you here.
If I could only hear one voice for ever in my heart,
I’d turn the volume up to hear your voice alone sweetheart.
If there’s a void within my life that no one else can fill,
I’d place you there within that space and love you just until..
all time has stopped,
all sound is mute,
eternity defined….
our love goes on forever and  is subtely  entwined.
If every night I close my eyes and felt you by my side,
I’d never sleep a moments sleep, my eyes just open wide.
With every single breath I take
I want to breathe you in,
And every touch I feel you take
remains upon my skin.
If this is love,then I surrender and lose all control,
you have my heart, my life , my love, my body and my soul.
 
 
 
 

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StevieC

Beautiful words, beautiful sentiment.. you have a beautiful heart. This is one to pin! love it!

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lodigiana

Thank you  so much for those kind words! appreciated greatly xx

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! LO!!..... this is such a lotic piece...., flowing like a river of lyrical intent..... I'm a songwriter (I was in the studio this past weekend) so trust me when I say this could be a song so easily!!...... not an easy accomplishment my friend...... but then again, you ARE capable of writing on ANYTHING...... and you just keep getting better the more I read you!!...... great lyrics here dear poet sister!!...... FISTFUL-O-STARS!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo 😉☀✴✳♥

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lodigiana

Hi Tony- you are the songwriter ...I am the singer...words create harmony, harmony creates fusion and fusion brings about joining- that's about all there is to love in my world! Thank you so so much for your comments and feel free to use any of this to put to music...the world needs soothing music and I know you are the Master!!! Thanks again dear friend
Lodigiana xxx

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Cherie Sumner

Hi Lodigiana!  Love can certainly obsess in the mind and make one feel this incredible addictive high...I understand...lol   Love the intention of this whole write...I was there!  Love n Hugs, xox

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lodigiana

Hi Cherie- it's a gift to have known love like this...and an addiction no one wants to break free of!I'm with you on this one sister!!! thanks  as always for your kind words!...
Lodigiana xxx

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Leah Cabael Yodico

Hi Lodigiana, poets make the best songwriters/// I agree with Tony, this can be a song// words can create harmony or fusion, I agree with you, so, just choose the words with care//

 

 

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lodigiana

Hi Leah, my passions in life are  writing poetry and singing/music-both require a passion that only comes from the heart and both can be a sharing experience-a way of connecting with everyone...as you say  words need to be chosen with care but when the right ones are in place then sometimes a little bit of magic can happen ..thank you so much for stopping by -always welcome! xxx

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Sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

To have a love here and in the here-after is truly a blessing...

You've got gold all around this masterpiece...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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lodigiana

Hi Sparrowsong, thank you so much for your lovely words and yes love really is a blessing!! Lodigiana xxx

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