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If I could

If I could

If I could...
Sharon Maria Moemise

I'd carve him from the strongest ebony
And name him after a famous tree
He'd endure rain, shine and harsh snow
And would stay steady even while winds blow

I'd outline his face bold and firmly etched
Atop shoulders and a body perfectly chiseled
Toned thighs, tight muscles, strong hands  
All that and more... a modern day Adonis

I'd accentuate his eyes that stares through me
Strong jaw, delicious lips and almost perfect  teeth
If I could create his touch, I'd melt before completion
It'd sear my skin, capture my senses, drive me to destruction.

If I could, I'd create his perfection in its rarest form
and the intensity with which he holds me with arms so strong
I'd create how he leaves me completely sated, yet still yearning
I would, if I could, carve him in my soul, and bind him to my heartstring

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Nine Eleven

Wow, amazing. I really love this, your looking for the perfect partner, I can only imagine it's like a conversation god was having with an angel about creating man kind, I guess it didn't work out to well, the will of man was the one thing god messed up. Great poem, thanks for sharing.

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Dean Kuch

❝ I'd outline his face bold and firmly etched
Atop shoulders and a body perfectly chiseled
Toned thighs, tight muscles, strong hands  
All that and more... a modern day Adonis

I'd accentuate his eyes that stares through me
Strong jaw, delicious lips and almost perfect  teeth
If I could create his touch, I'd melt before completion
It'd sear my skin, capture my senses, drive me to destruction❞

Okay, Sharon. Chiseled muscles, Adonnis-like looks...those are all superficial things that will eventually disappear over time.
But what about his mind?
Would you want him to be intelligent?
Would you like him to be able to recite Shakespeare as eloquently as he would Kanye West lyrics?
How about qualities such as compassion, or caring?
Strong morals.

Now, if you can find someone who has both looks as well as brains then you've got something.
Best wishes,
~Dean Kuch ♪ღ♫

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