Poem - 16 July 2017, 13:13

If I went tomorrow

Allan Pinfield-Wells

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If my light was to fade away,
Would anyone notice?
If my face was full of dismay,
Would anyone notice?

If I cry, If I sleep and If hug the pillow,
Would anyone notice?
If I went away to find soul,
Would anyone notice?

I hate the way I feel inside,
That’s all I notice.
I hate the feeling wanting to cry,
That’s all I notice.

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Keywords:

Dead, Decision, Depression, Desperation, Destruction

Poetry Genre:

Drama, Freestyle, Melodrama, Speculative, Tragedy

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