If I were in love
Revised

If I were in love
It would be with the trees.
Trees have the nature
To shed all their leaves.
If I were in love
It would be with the clouds.
Clouds are so loud
When rain pours itself down.
If I were to swing from a push
Out far enough
On the play ground of life,
I would finish up hardly
Starved of the light.
And if this love could catch
People mightn't be frightened
So much of the night.
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What ever we love, is indeed the very reason that we should be in love with it🌹 trees are good. I quite love the palm tree and the baobab personally 🌹
Before pen and paper
I would think, a birch, or an elm?
As you would know, all
Plath trees, from Ariel.
Well, I don't know anything
About these trees.
Keep it simple Rory,
So, just became tree.
Rory I particularly like this one from you. It's quite dream like in quality and beautifully written with the short verses and rhyming x
Some ones of mine get too
Complicated, no? Too abstract.