Poem -
I'm appalled
I'm appalled by my ego, my actions my wants and needsÂ
I'm calling for an exorcism stand back yeh  it's meanÂ
You see I could be pointing fingers and calling out names but that would mean the madness sadly remains.
In the forefront of my mind through the darkened shadowsÂ
I see redemption, not only for myself but for anyone who might fallow by example
 ~Chanty~
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Greetings Chantal,
Very motivationally spoken Chantal and within it, promotes a lot of pride in who you are and what you stand for and thrives to be. Not being afraid to be first in line, proves the stability in your beliefs not only in yourself but with those whom follows as your constituents as well..Sometimes taking so many stands, leads to episodes of failure,then again, sometimes you got to lose in order to win again,(per fantasia), thus proves you have no fear of failure, you seek only the triumphs in life you feel you deserve...Very strong woman in deed and powerful poem to prove it.
Kind regards,
Jim
There is much honor in being who I am but at the same time I am no grater than any one else I just wanna be a good representative of human kind :) thank you so much for your comment it was humbling to read :) I appriciate all feedback and perspectives allowing me to envole and better understand mankind as a whole. Blessing to your and yours. Thank you :)
@ angel777 thank you for your comment.Â
Wish I could edit the typo's in my comments lolÂ
In my reply to Jim's comment I meant to write. Blessings to you and yours*
In my reply to Chris comment, I wanted to clarify that the egotistal emotion was coming from others at the time but I'm a firm believer that what you see in others also exists in you and that was in inspiration for the poem.Â
Thanks to all. Blessed be.Â
Thank you William for your comment :) Â my greatest hope is to inspire and to remain inspired by all.Â
This poem so a talent and skill that some cant reach. I applaud this poem, strong beginning with a perfect ending. "Good shit"
Thank you so much,it's a great feeling when ppl relate to something that comes from your heart :)Â