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I'm close to tears.

I'm close to tears ,
And i don't know why,
This burden inside,
To big to hide,
I'm afraid of the ground,
As i fall,
I scream inside,
I just want to fly,
The heavy weight,
holds me down,
I'm close to tears ,and i don't know why,

Maybe im afraid to fly...........falling seems a long way down.

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Ravindra Kumar

"I just want to fly..", carry on..my sincere blessings are with you..why should we drop tears when all are basking..providential sentiment, good..with love..xx Ravindra Kumar xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Dearest ravindra, thank you sweetheart with all my heart xoxo Nardine xoxo

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Jimmy Arnold

Ravindra has spoken it better than any and your (style of free), if cost was applied, ow-how  would all your worries, be of no more....You are rich, in your style of poetry and have a way of putting all you feel, securely on paper from heart and mind. Your poems allow others, facing the same obstacle you bring to light, realize  that they, aren't alone and that where there’s a will, there will always be a way and you have truly found yours, deeply embedded within you and throughout, your alluring presentation of poetry, even when the mood, may not present to you, the best of circumstances, at the time....We, without the presence of failure, never will experience, the true meaning, of a win. You are a winner my dear, in all you say and do and you show it to us (all) here, on a daily basis…Shed your tears and you shed as well, all the emotions, that caused the tears, to bellow up, from the start…Enjoyed once again, the entire poem, although once again, the sadness felt, was well in it, (the poem), contained..

Take Care,

Jimmy

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Nardine Sanderson

Dearest brother Jimmy thank you again sweetheart for your truly adoring words of wisdom, and respect from a heart of pure intentions, you really are a kind hearted man, sweetest to have met, love to you dear one, little sis, nardine xoxo

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