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I’M FEELING DOWN

I’M FEELING DOWN

When the mornings fade in shades of gray,  
And dreams that danced now drift away,  
Loneliness whispers, soft yet profound 
And in the echoing void, I am feeling down.

A weight sits heavily upon my chest 
The world spins on, but I find no rest.
I wonder through the hollow space
Where laughter used to find its place.

A silent sigh, a burdened heart,  
With each smile, I cloaked the pain in my heart.
As the whispered winds chill my bones,  
I seek connection but feel alone.  

Yet in this gloom, a flicker gleams,  
A glint of hope through shrouded dreams;  
For even clouds, though dark and low,  
Can part to let a silver glow.  

So let the tempest whirl and shout,  
I’ll find my voice I will not doubt;  
Through heaviness and nights profound,  
I’ll rise again, though feeling down.  

Wilford Barker.
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Wilford...

Feeling as though you're reaching out to help someone...

Admirable...

​​​​​​Some people can feel very alone...

I hope this definitely helps you find the one to come to your mission...

I say that because, you just recently got engaged...

You should be over the Moon...

Great write and pic...

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong 

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Wilford Barker

Righty said Sparrowsong..
I am still soaking up the love bliss.
Or should I say… We are. Lol.
A friend of mine is facing a few problems..
Wishing him all the best.
Thank you beautiful Sparrowsong.

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Nine Eleven

It's these moments of darkness that aid our poetic flow.

Masterful poetry Wilford.

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Wilford Barker

Thank you so much for your kindness Nine Eleven.
But there is always tomorrow.

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