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Marion

Nice...it drew me ?

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Katina Woodruff...

Short and sweet. Have you read the poem, The Red Wheelbarrow? It's one of the most famous one line poems, that uses space to create depth in the poem and leaves room for imagination. Good job, Eddie. 

The Red Wheelbarrow, by Williams Carlos Williams 
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/45502/the-red-wheelbarrow
This poem is available in print as well as an audio version below: 
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/play/75674
 

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