Poem - 04 May 2014, 01:10

Immense Desire

It begins with the eyes. Exposing inner accuracy. In all its forms.

Beauty. Vulnerability. Deception. Lies.
Your eyes took me by surprise. The color, icy blue. They were warm.
Comforting. Inviting. Honest. True.

It ends with the dynamism. Embodying internal veracity. In all its configurations.

Enticing. Captivating. Stable. Commendable.
Your actions proved noble. You were absolutely mesmerizing. Placing me on a pedestal.
Comforting. Inviting. Honest. True.

I was submissive to the intensity, my desire immense.

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...04 May 2014, 01:28

Valerie Lynn,

This is a lovely verse, The image of the eyes and flower is fabulous. Thanks for sharing, My applause

Enticing. Captivating. Stable. Commendable.
Your actions proved noble.
You were absolutely mesmerizing.
Placing me on a pedestal.
Comforting. Inviting. Honest. True.
I was submissive to the intensity, my desire immense.

My reply poem as a return gift to Valerie Lynn

Backwards or afterwards
Your eyes hang on that
Shining wetly white; giving off,
the most absurd of earthly aromas.
It's the smell of fresh soil in the spring,
but fresh soil somehow distilled

Regards, Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Valerie Lynn04 May 2014, 01:33

Wow your reply poem is pretty intense! I was not even expecting any replies to this poem. For me this is very different! But I am determined to reach out my comfort zone. I was not even sure this made any sense so thank you for your comment!!

Love,

YLS ❤️

AUTHOR WILLIAMS...05 May 2014, 16:48

Dear Valerie Lynn,