Poem -
Immense Desire
It begins with the eyes. Exposing inner accuracy. In all its forms.
Beauty. Vulnerability. Deception. Lies.
Your eyes took me by surprise. The color, icy blue. They were warm.
Comforting. Inviting. Honest. True.
It ends with the dynamism. Embodying internal veracity. In all its configurations.
Enticing. Captivating. Stable. Commendable.
Your actions proved noble. You were absolutely mesmerizing. Placing me on a pedestal.
Comforting. Inviting. Honest. True.
I was submissive to the intensity, my desire immense.
© 2014 Valerie Lynn
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Comments
Valerie Lynn,
This is a lovely verse, The image of the eyes and flower is fabulous. Thanks for sharing, My applause
My reply poem as a return gift to Valerie Lynn
Regards, Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Wow your reply poem is pretty intense! I was not even expecting any replies to this poem. For me this is very different! But I am determined to reach out my comfort zone. I was not even sure this made any sense so thank you for your comment!!
Love,
YLS ❤️
Dear Valerie Lynn,
My vote, My nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
What an honor! Thank you Williamsji for this nomination!!!
♥️ YLS
Excellent write Val
love
Thank you so much Piusha! Your comment just made me so happy! :)
Much Love!
Val <3
I love how you use eyes in poetry. Really thoughtful.
The short staccato sentences in this are brilliant.
Wow Thank you Fin!! Nice to meet you :) looking forward to reading your work!
Val ❤️