Poem - 28 February 2021, 01:12

(Im)mortal

(Im)mortal

Sleep and death
mortal friends
thinking of you
takes my sleep
not sleeping
makes me thinking of you
immortal till I die.

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John Loopstra26 May 2021, 03:55

Sorry, the stars are (again) not cooperating - I love the piece enough for five stars... Perhaps later from the computer at home 9this is the office workstation... Sleepless we wait for love to lullaby us into sleep, yet for love we do not want to sleep

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