Poem -
~ IMMORTAL GARDEN ~
Within the reach of ears and eyes
I plan to plant my seeds surprises
Songs of love and compromises
Shall be my immortal garden
Living on, bearing beauties fruit
From each seasons soft salute
Shall shine on in eternities roots
And never, ever, harden
For within its simple soft parade
Shall march a well woven brocade
Like spring to winter's cavalcade
Of ever evolving jargon
I wish to leave poetic writes
To grow and inspire newborn scribes
For my time upon this earth draws nigh
As I work my immortal garden
So, within the reach of ears and eyes
I leave mazes for poetic spies
To unfurl my little hidden prizes
Here, in my Immortal Garden...
Tony Taylor
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Super creative way to deliver such truth, as our work will forever live on, far past the bodies that host our souls. Inspiring read as always Tony .Β
awesome write Tony!.............................................................................Jim
Yup, leaving our little efforts around to be consumed after weβre gone!.
Inspirational as always Tony!
JP
Utterly beautiful Tony x
Wow this is stunning for so many reasons Tony. Firstly let me applaud you on the rhyming scheme here. The structure and the fact each stanza ends the same. This sings off the page like a hymn. This is beautiful poetry T, so much went into ensuring this rang out in its pure splendour. Now the message in this wonderful write is one that warms the heart of all who stumble upon this perfectly crafted piece. For us poets, our writings are our true legacy in life. They shall live on and hopefully reach out to so many other future poets. Your poem made me think of my own profile info. Which basically is just a short poem on how my words are my legacy. This here is blooming brilliantly penned my wonderful human :) x
There are no seasons here, everything about this page fits just as I imagine it was intended .. and I do also believe the seeds sown by your pen will serve to fertilise & inspire the imaginations of would be wordsmiths & poets far and wide ................ and .. quite writely serve as but part of the legacy you shall inevitably & ultimately leave behind :)
NevilleΒ