Poem -
Imperative
It is imperative we make most of lifes miracle,
When there is so much around us that is fatal !
A day should be appreciated like a last chance
To seek satisfaction from what is of significance !
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Admiring our world with its varied complexity
We have an understanding of real opportunity !
We can bring smiles or fun to a loving occasion
As the wise share wonders of a bountiful creation.
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A myriad of unique souls of common reasoning
Want to live in an existence far more appealing !
Uniform desire drives all to construct a habitat
So future generations inherit what is marveled at !
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Hey SIR WATERS!!..... the line that jumped out me....."A day should be appreciated like a last chance" is one that is a part of my working belief system since I first got sick..... some days are better than others....... sad to know that it takes such extreme circumstances to make a person recognize, or appreciate each day for what it is.....a gift ......to pass that understanding on ......should be a part of our reason for being alive....... thanx for the reminder.....great write my friend!!.......ALL STARS!!...... been missing you around here brother poet!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
You are a man of special heart and soul given to spread messages which truly matter. Your circumstances have led you to a fresh perspective which all should take notice of.
Thank you for your continued support which is always welcomed and appreciated.
Thank you for being there.
Take care my friend. Wishing you the best !
:)
This is really beautiful. The language and clever craft of punctuation really helps to convey the depth of the feelings expressed in this piece. I love it!
- Liv
So pleased you enjoyed reading this as much as you did.
Glad you found the messages within the piece and the motives behind its conception well conceived.
Thank you for giving such supportive comment.
Wishing you the best. :)
Such a well constructed piece Richard! I loved it and love the way you deliver a positive message to remember to appreciate everything and to make no secret of it! Great stuff!
Lodigiana xxx
Much of my poetry focuses on the positive and emphasises how all should appreciate life as much as possible.
It is in finding the outlook which maintains a determination to prevail, despite circumstance, and which brings contentment to the soul that a fulfilling existence is achieved.
Thank you for such encouraging comment.
Take care. :)