Poem -
in my silence
the night is in its silence
an angel comes a smile from up above
into my Soul
i loved
like petals touch of love on days
like a butterfly tongue of loving you
so gently to its touch
as i dream embracing life
enlightening time i see
a quality of love divine
when water flows beneath my feet
and gardens blossom to my life as neat
come to me in love my love
as i wait for i love the way you love
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Hey Sir LORRIS!!......there is a softness to this piece that helps the imagery you create, in the minds eye of the reader, to shine......It has some VERY memorable phrasing throughout as well ~
~ "Come to me in love
My Love, as I wait,
For I Love
The way you Love..."
VERY compelling phrasing my friend!!.........ALL STARS!!......well done dear poet brother!!.....Bravo!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
thank you Tony
I found this very dream like Lorris...surreal...great stuff 😊
Thank you Marion
THANK YOU Hj