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In response.

I was born in January, a Wednesday afternoon,
(flowers had wilted, I was born to bloom)

I was raised through protagonists in literature,
I was raised to want more, a Life to procure.

Compromise came, but never accepted,
I still lived my life, my visions projected:

A shameful need for success and recognition,
(a less acknowledged want for domestic tradition.)

I still lack a concept of the dedication required,
The people, who bled constant, worked and perspired.Β 

I have a faith that this life was made for me,
Laid out and preserved. A set ecstasy.

I could end up with little and deserve even less,
Live a life that is well and good (through time, though, suppress

The worth of my wants, and learn and evolve)
And find something else. A bliss. I’ll absolve.Β 

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Tony Taylor

Hey LILY!!... this is VERY well crafted......I LOVE the way you formatted this!!.... it has near-perfect poetic rhythm and timing...... when you read this aloud you get an even greater sense of its flow and intent!!...... being aware of one's own sense of self-worth & the cost/need of accomplishing one's wants and desires is easily overlooked by the unthinking person.... but here you speak of the evolution of the thinking person...... and the realization that you are a part of something greater than self.......A VERY compelling write.... delivered with an honesty that shines through beautifully!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet sister!!.... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴?✴❀

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hey, thanks so much, I'm still trying to work out how trustworthy this site is, but I'm so glad you liked it x
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