Poem -

In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps

just in case you missed it first time .. In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps


there is an ache, I cannot describe
a pain contained, so deep inside ..

yet still, as a river aches for the sea
then I too do ache, for your company

and so, for a time we are immortal
then gone quick, like a lightening flash ..

Yes, in a shutter speed if lucky, tho less
than the blink, of two eyes perhaps ..

 

Like 4 Pin it 3
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Gwendoline

Hello Nev, this is you doing what you do so well. What a captivating piece to read. Life is indeed short lived in the grand scheme of things. Those who are lost before us, remind us how precious time is. When we are left longing for just a moment more with them. I could feel that here. That ache that can never leave the one left behind. Beautifully worded 

I dare say I have more of your wonderful works to catch up on, I look forward to reading you my friend 

Gwen xx

Reply
author
Neville

I am bowled over .. bless you and more than & then some xx

Reply
author
Marion

If i don't comment on.all your work today know that you are a wonderful read...sorry I missed them first time around x

Reply
author
Neville

Don't be daft chuck .. the fact you cared to post at all is bloomin good enough for this old fella x

Reply
Poem -

Some Kind of African Life

please be patient, I will respond to all previous messages and...

After twenty nine pints of O rhesus positive
and dying three times ..
Not to mention eight...

Poem -

The Weight of Enlightenment

I am almost too ashamed
to admit that
it took me years to realise,
the warmest...

Poem -

One More Open Verdict For...

She came out of the sky like
a rocket
and for a moment, or maybe
not quite
...

Latest poems in Freestyle

Poem -

Ralph Part 2

Ralph Part 2

Scream I yell I shout

Bleed my hell my doubt

See me fail cut me down...

Poem -

Moonless Night(mare)

Moonless Night(mare)

Painted colors circle my mind

Found the perfect place to hide

Come to me...

Poem -

Negative Vibes

Negative Vibes

On edge I can't seem to breathe

Panic I lose control

Everything you still...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com